I composed this lead in. It feels right but could change:
In the Land of Opportunity, Fortunes rise and Fortunes fall but Fortunes are forever and fluid as an ocean swell. In human-scale perception, some gain the heights, others wallow in the troughs and most exist between the two.
Seeking Something More, the ambitious suffer. They fall reaching for the sun, are rent apart glimpsing the divine, are burdened by knowledge of lust, greed and folly.
I'll post the first chapter in January.
Happy Holidays!
Tuesday, November 30, 2010
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I changed it to narrative rather than an attempt at poetry.
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